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True Tales: An Erotic E-zine of Masculinity and Power
FICTION: Cruel Fate 
26th-Oct-2006 05:49 am
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FICTION: Cruel Fate. By David C. Set in a bar below hills scarred by forest fire, this darkly haunting tale describes an unlikely encounter between a top and a sneaker-shod young man who just won't let him alone.

"I'm flagging black left. You know what that means?" He shrugged. "It means," I said, turning my attention back to the game, "that I'm out of your league."

Comments 
26th-Oct-2006 08:10 am (UTC) - Thank you for sharing this
Very well written, nice imagery with the smoldering fires in the hills and in their souls.
26th-Oct-2006 12:28 pm (UTC)
Very cool story. I particularly liked that by the end the top had learned something too. Great work.

Angie
27th-Oct-2006 12:28 am (UTC)
Thank you so much. I was completely mesmerized and couldn't stop reading. It was interesting to read about a young man trying to figure out his own sexuality and his own desires. I wish we could all figure them out and be able to enjoy them.
27th-Oct-2006 01:15 am (UTC)
I was also mesmerized by this story; wondering what the outcome would be.

This young man was lucky in that he had that first experience which, though it was rejected at first, would reform him into someone he really wanted to be.

Have we all had that kind of experience? I wonder...
28th-Oct-2006 10:46 pm (UTC)
Very well-written, which is depressingly unusual for gay erotica in general, and gay kink erotica in particular.
13th-Nov-2006 06:30 am (UTC)
wandered through via a link from a fanfiction site and felt compelled to comment.

Very well written original characters; without even knowing their names, they both come across as individuals, not archetypes. The imagery of the fire is very vivid as well.

Thanks for a great read.
18th-Nov-2007 08:22 pm (UTC)
Wow! Really like the simple describtions of the scenery, it's rough around the edges, not smoothed out for the reader, I like that. And of course I love the endm akways good to see people learn something about themselves and others. :)

Ooh, last review was over a year ago, lol.
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