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True Tales: An Erotic E-zine of Masculinity and Power
FICTION: Tryout at the Bondage Club 
27th-Oct-2006 09:20 am (UTC)
I really liked this, as much for the talk-and-think as for the scene itself. It was hot, sure, but it also sounded like a realistic portrayal of two guys trying to work out a real-world relationship, something that could last once the sexual buzz was past.

Right up at the beginning, when Matt realized that Terry was nervous too and that he could humiliate him in front of the rest of the club members with just a word, that's when I knew it was going to be good. Perfect, impervious masters are fun for the fantasy world, but in stories set in the real world I much prefer humans as characters and it was clear right from the start that that's what I was going to get. Good job.

3rd-Nov-2006 11:39 pm (UTC)
Oh, I really, really enjoyed this. The awkward realism just made everything feel more intense. I really like the characters, and I definitely hope they can make things work.
6th-Nov-2006 05:39 am (UTC)
I really loved this story it's very sweet and also makes a few really valid points M/s relationships and communication. It's well crafted, realistic and enjoyable.
And? kinky gay guys having a hot scene- there really isn't anything here that I don't entirely love.
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